Need help with build

I tried to create my own build, but it's struggling to finish the ascendency, keep dying along with all minions, which is what actually kills me,

https://www.pathofexile.com/fullscreen-passive-skill-tree/AAAABgMAJBEtHggfxyL0I3slsikPK3gsnC2LMkk66UmxUzVWLmKGYsFr22wLbRl8g30Ykyeevb-XyT3Lf9fP3tTfiuGS6QLviPIe9Br5NwADPNYje_t9YsEQ3zJJ?accountName=IntrudeRZA&characterName=RalfMcMinion

any advice? very close to just giving up

You need to open your profile so we can inspect your character. The tree you linked is only until a few levels, so thats not a comprehensive picture at all.

You can hit me up on discord and I'll be glad to help: dejrons

How do i share specicific character? I managed to get past this issue but still wouldn't mind some advices since i only have like 300 hours in the game